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©2008-2009 ~sanjouin-dacapo
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Peach face lovebird, drawn in Artrage. Reference here: [link] and here: [link]

Critique is appreciated, and I am using this to build my portfolio. For a drawing commission like this I will charge around $45.

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:iconchuongchosoi:
Beautiful!

When TWR sees my comments to your artworks here, he may not realize the fact that my critiques helped you to improve on art like this one here.

That would put us several steps further ahead of TWR.

Okay now for the critiques since this art is a challenging one for me.

Try to cover up some fading spots on the painted area especially around the beak.

Thats my only critique because you know you're doing better if your artwork becomes more challenging to critique.

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Oh thank you! I thought I did poorly in some areas of this picture LOL! Anyway, I'm gonna be putting my originals up for sale on some other sites as well because I NEED extra money BAD!

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:iconchuongchosoi:
Then you need LOTS of critiques! =D

Now THATS SERIOUS BUSINESS! (I stole that quote from ED LOL)

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The side effects of World of Warcraft. -> [link]

I'm Chuong Tamatzui on Second Life! Hunt me down there!
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:D

Bring it then! BRING IT!

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:iconmngamojemo:
Nice! You've definitely improved in adding more details and a greater depth of color. The blue background complements the peach of the birdy well.

The feathers on the underbelly are too shaggy, though. They ought to go less directly down, and make soft semicircles instead.

Perhaps a little more definition on the feet, as well. I love the decorations around the perch. They're very tasteful

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Thank you! I agree the feathers are too shaggy, and will fix that and the feet! And I'm glad you like the decorations as well! In my most recent picture, I did an entire background for a parrot to sit on. And I painted it using some VERY cheap media... can you guess what kind I used?

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:iconmngamojemo:
Crayola watercolor?

I love the background on your macaw. It's like he's in a foggy rainforest.

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"Every time you comment, a little piece of me dies. I don't deserve this." -~A-N-A-S-T-A-S-I-A
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Yup! Crayola watercolor! Was trying to prove that you can make a good picture with crayola, and it's not the crayons that make crayon-drawn art look bad.

I'm glad you like the macaw and the background ^^

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:iconjmsnooks:
So far so good. Do you have any comissions yet?

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